Concrit-Meme

(filched from bellonablack)

Which I realise is pretty tough on readers - sorry!

If there's any area you think I need improvement on, characterization, description, pacing, etc, I'd like to know. :-) I'll not be rude or anything in response! I uh, thrive on correction.
*giggles*

I need this an antidote today, 'cause I think I got one of the most mind-blowing bits of feedback ever this morning... am still glowing :).