I've just read the translation of "Property is theft" and now I find this fanfic which could seriously represent a danger for my poor heart! O_O (All the more considering that I should be studying but I can't stop re-reading the pages I printed!) To tell the truth I'm not very fond of Ron as a character with sexual potential, but his role in this story is SO right for him. Making him an helpless (even if confused and ready to -try to- choose the lesser of two evils) object in Lucius's evil hands was the only way to make it work for me, and his canon personality was also rather evident in his insecurity. And Harry, oh, he's adorable under the effects of this potion, really. Especially when he blows Lucius while liking it and exposing his mouth to the man's and Ron's eyes...
The sex part: OH MY GOD YES! Usually the threesomes evolve in multiple oral sessions or double penetrations (which I love reading), but this way of having sex in 3 is wonderful too, because the one in control can really fuck two people at the same time just by pushing...and it's also the best way to display Lucius's mind control- He's a natural born top, yes he is *_*
Malfoy reached for Ron's prick, and Ron nearly threw his head back and screamed as the insistent hand guided it to Harry's cleft. OMG this is too hot. And so is this brain-melting command: "Fuck him properly or I'll make you, Weasley!" And he really did! Give me this Lucius who can move inside a virgin while making him enter another virgin against his will. Could he be more dominating than this?
And here's what made me loose my mind for good: "Please, Ron," he whispered. "You can't hurt me."
Ron struggled for breath and made a conscious effort to relax his spine against Malfoy, to let himself be rocked into Harry with increasing force. Reflexively, he reached out to wrap his hand around Harry's swollen, crimson cock, feeling the slick coating of precome that had seeped from the slit. Acceptance *_* Resignation *_* Shameful, guilty but unavoidable pleasure *_*
Brilliant ending, finally. Two pervs are always better than one :D
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Date: 2006-05-23 08:46 am (UTC)(All the more considering that I should be studying but I can't stop re-reading the pages I printed!)
To tell the truth I'm not very fond of Ron as a character with sexual potential, but his role in this story is SO right for him. Making him an helpless (even if confused and ready to -try to- choose the lesser of two evils) object in Lucius's evil hands was the only way to make it work for me, and his canon personality was also rather evident in his insecurity.
And Harry, oh, he's adorable under the effects of this potion, really. Especially when he blows Lucius while liking it and exposing his mouth to the man's and Ron's eyes...
The sex part: OH MY GOD YES! Usually the threesomes evolve in multiple oral sessions or double penetrations (which I love reading), but this way of having sex in 3 is wonderful too, because the one in control can really fuck two people at the same time just by pushing...and it's also the best way to display Lucius's mind control- He's a natural born top, yes he is *_*
Malfoy reached for Ron's prick, and Ron nearly threw his head back and screamed as the insistent hand guided it to Harry's cleft.
OMG this is too hot.
And so is this brain-melting command:
"Fuck him properly or I'll make you, Weasley!"
And he really did!
Give me this Lucius who can move inside a virgin while making him enter another virgin against his will. Could he be more dominating than this?
And here's what made me loose my mind for good:
"Please, Ron," he whispered. "You can't hurt me."
Ron struggled for breath and made a conscious effort to relax his spine against Malfoy, to let himself be rocked into Harry with increasing force. Reflexively, he reached out to wrap his hand around Harry's swollen, crimson cock, feeling the slick coating of precome that had seeped from the slit.
Acceptance *_* Resignation *_* Shameful, guilty but unavoidable pleasure *_*
Brilliant ending, finally. Two pervs are always better than one :D
Thank you so much for writing this!