Concrit-Meme

[kennahijja]

(filched from bellonablack)

Which I realise is pretty tough on readers - sorry!

If there's any area you think I need improvement on, characterization, description, pacing, etc, I'd like to know. :-) I'll not be rude or anything in response! I uh, thrive on correction.
*giggles*

I need this an antidote today, 'cause I think I got one of the most mind-blowing bits of feedback ever this morning... am still glowing :).

Comments

[melusinahp.livejournal.com]

Yeah... You definitely need to be taken down a peg or two. ;P

Hmmm. You should write more Fenrir/Harry/Draco threesomes. You don't write nearly enough of those.

[jaelle-n-gilla.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you are glowing and I am certainly not taking you down today. Maybe another day *g*

[snorkackcatcher]

I think you need to work on the "not writing depressing endings" bit. :)

[kennahijja.livejournal.com]

*pokes out tongue like kittenicon*

Once was enough ;). Though I'm writing Fenrir now - does that help?

[kennahijja.livejournal.com]

Do! ;)

[kennahijja.livejournal.com]

*thwaps*

I live to depress... or something :). But all right, the next happy ending I write will be yours.

[melusinahp.livejournal.com]

*grins* Well, it's certainly intriguing.