AriadneElda ([identity profile] ariadneelda.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kennahijja 2009-03-01 11:19 am (UTC)

Oh, that was great!

"But he creeps me out – he's so much like Lucius."

I love this take on Scorpius! Which probably doesn't surprise you at all. ;-)

And I loved the dialogue and their interaction and that Scorpius left James there like that. :D

Small typo: and James bit back his curses even through they scratched painfully in his throat.

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