This was great. I think it probably benefited from the length of time you took over it, it has depth and subtlety. The development of characters, the way you hint at what might have happened between Ron and Draco, the way Ron in particular alternates between leading and leading while wanting Harry's support are all really well done.
The writing style suits the piece too, descriptive, occasionally lyrical, very engaging.
You've actually managed to make the physical sex (while superbly written and very hot) secondary to the erotic appeal of the characters' thoughts and interactions with each other. I don't know if that was what you were intending, but I really liked that aspect of the story. I'm particularly impressed at how you managed to develop all three characters within the space of an evening's interaction.
I really think it's up there for me with the best things you've written, and I do love your writing :D Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 2005-01-11 12:42 pm (UTC)The writing style suits the piece too, descriptive, occasionally lyrical, very engaging.
You've actually managed to make the physical sex (while superbly written and very hot) secondary to the erotic appeal of the characters' thoughts and interactions with each other. I don't know if that was what you were intending, but I really liked that aspect of the story. I'm particularly impressed at how you managed to develop all three characters within the space of an evening's interaction.
I really think it's up there for me with the best things you've written, and I do love your writing :D Thanks for sharing it.