Is this the story that you were talking about the other day, that you didn't know whether to label it "OC" or not?
Yep, exactly that :).

Thanks so much - I had hoped the effect would be ambiguity and uneasiness, so I'm quite happy it worked that way :).

As for the OC, I can't say I would like her as a person, but I loved her as a character.
You put into words *exactly* how I feel about her. I don't think I like her, but I can quite emphatise with her...