You need to write! Tuesday or Wednesday, you said. You promised a new chapter.
Was it OK then? 'He flinched, staring up at the man on the horse.' still makes me twitch and I wrote it. (The pure malice behind healing someone in that situation...) Plus where he slides down the tree. I hope the twist at the end was a surprise?
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Date: 2005-11-29 06:14 pm (UTC)Was it OK then? 'He flinched, staring up at the man on the horse.' still makes me twitch and I wrote it. (The pure malice behind healing someone in that situation...) Plus where he slides down the tree. I hope the twist at the end was a surprise?