Oh, don't worry about that! I'd forgotten, actually, which shows how much it bothered me! I just assumed you'd been in two minds about the best tense, and when you'd come back to edit/rewrite, you'd carried on in the tense your subconscious was in, instead of the tense the story was in. (Because I've done that, too!)
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Date: 2005-11-29 08:08 pm (UTC)