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kennahijja ([personal profile] kennahijja) wrote2006-04-13 09:35 pm

Ficlet: Looking at You, Kid (or: Harry Potter Goes Casablanca) [SB/HP, HP/HG, PG-ish]

I blame this entirely on [livejournal.com profile] liriaen, who tempted me sorely with the following prompt:

Sirius Black, Harry Potter and Hermione Granger are the central triangle of characters in "Casablanca". What's their version of the famous parting lines (between Bogart and Bergman)?

Featuring Sirius as Rick, Harry as Ilsa, and Hermione as Viktor (pun not at all intended :).

Warning: AU in all possible directions!


It's a cold, windy late afternoon that finds Harry and Hermione standing before Sirius on the Flying Carpet runway. Sirius lifts his hand and gently cups Harry's face.

"I've been looking at you, kid. The Horcrux - it isn't you. Go with her - get out of here."

Tears glisten in Harry's eyes even as Hermione puts a hand on his sleeve, her gaze nervously fixed at the approaching brooms in the distance. "Harry..."

Harry bites his lip, not able to tear himself away from Sirius's face. Sirius pulls him close for a second; his mouth lightly brushes Harry's lips, then his forehead. He can feel Harry's choked sob against his throat.

Sirius looks at Hermione, his heart as torn as the expression on Harry's face. "Take him away from here. Be safe." And then, banishing all doubt from his voice, "Be happy."

A tiny, pained grimace, then Hermione nods and tugs on Harry's sleeve again. Harry looks at nothing for a second; then he turns away. His hand slips into hers.

They walk towards the waiting carpet, their steps picking up with every bit of distance they gain. Sirius follows Harry's every move, but Harry does not turn to him again. He knows he should be grateful.

Sirius feels the wind tear at his hair as the carpet lifts off, tastes the swirling dust in his mouth like ashes. The dust pricks his eyes, and he wipes it off angrily. He draws his wand. There is something he has yet to do.

A dark figure takes shape in front of him, bringing his broom to a halt on the ground with a thud and all the grace of a mangy owl with two broken legs.

"You blasted fool!" Severus Snape snarls, yellow teeth bared and spraying Sirius' face with spittle in his rage. "The boy is Voldemort's last Horcrux. You helped him escape!" Potion-stained fingers close around air like a vulture's claws sinking into something small, and helpless. "The Dark Lord will rise again, because Sirius Black had to shelter his little catamite!" Snape's face twists, dark and hateful. "He'll never forgive you if he finds out."

Sirius nods, a careless shrug of one shoulder. The wind still tugs at his hair as the Aurors rush up way behind Snape.

"I know," he says, lightly as if he'd not lost anything yet – as if there had been no James, no Azkaban, no Harry... Harry.

He raises his wand, into Snape's uncomprehending, furious face. "And you, and I, are the only ones who know." The birth of comprehension dawns on Snape's ugly features, but this time, this one time, the greasy bastard is too late.

"Avada Kedavra!"

Snape's final slump into the dirt is as graceless as his fall from the sky.

Sirius puts away his wand and waits for the Aurors to land around him and the body. He's killed a fugitive Death Eater and murderer - in self-defence, he hears himself saying to Kingsley Shacklebolt, who nods, albeit with a frown on his face.

Sirius needs to remain free this time, because Snape was right. Lord Voldemort will return, again and again, as long as the last Horcrux remains undestroyed. And Sirius will happily devote - and surrender - the remains of his life to that battle.

But Harry will live. Harry will be free, even if it is in Hermione's arms. But he'll be free. And that's all that matters.


~ fin ~



And HAPPY EGG HUNTING! to the lot of you :).

[identity profile] cutecoati.livejournal.com 2006-04-13 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
*is speechless*

*throws herself adoringly at the feet of the genius which is [livejournal.com profile] kennahijja*

Brilliant. Just - brilliant!!!
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[identity profile] kennahijja.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks :). Didn't turn out too terrible for 15 minutes and my last viewing of 'Casablanca' about 10 years ago...
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[identity profile] liriaen.livejournal.com 2006-04-13 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
... and then, [livejournal.com profile] liriaen finally let go of the popcorn (to everybody's relief, that) which she had been noisily munching for the better part of the evening and started to bawl, rather unexpectedly, but with all the more vehemence.

... and between snot-freighted outbursts and much wringing of hands, she'd snuffle about "bared yellow legs, probably hairy, too" and "mangy owls" and intercontinental carpet flight and that she'd readily kill for a sentence like Sirius feels the wind tear at his hair as the carpet lifts off, tastes the swirling dust in his mouth like ashes.

Wonderful! I'm so happy the meme kickstarted this! 8] 't was great fun, indeed!
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[identity profile] kennahijja.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
*grin*
I swear I'm not perving on Snape's legs, hairy or not, even if my subconscious seems to disagree - "teeth, teeth!"
Glad you liked it - it was supposed to be a drabble, of course, but the art of concise has always escaped me ;).
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[identity profile] liriaen.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
the art of concise has always escaped me Arrr. As you know from my posts and commentsies, said art tends to slip from my fingers like a well-oiled sardinel. Btw, THAT scene as drabble would 've topped the concise art of haiku! Come to think of it, we should do HP-haiku-fests! =)
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[identity profile] kennahijja.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin*
But you can do it - the Cantarella drabbles are living (um, written) proof ;). I've yet to write something under 500 words...

Come to think of it, we should do HP-haiku-fests! =)
Now *that* would be great fun! :)

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[identity profile] liriaen.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Seriously, I lurve drabbles. The teethywhite one was fun. But my last Cantarella came in at ~570, so... erm... For the next batch I've taken a solemn vow to sniiiip, though.
A music mag I'm reading does CD reviews in haiku - sheer genius! Yea, haiku we should. :)
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[identity profile] kennahijja.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, but snipping off too much isn't good either - and I'm fond of long Cantarella!
Haiku CD reviews sound hysterical ;).

Yea, haiku we should.
Mmmh. There really should be a HP Haiku Fest. D'you think that's worth plotting over?



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[identity profile] liriaen.livejournal.com 2006-04-16 01:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm fond of long Cantarella! - I like that in a person !!! =) Yeah, the CD reviews always crack me up, especially since they mostly deal with metal or hardcore. A beautiful dichotomy there :]
I tell you, those haiku are infectious, even if the 5-7-5 pattern is bloody hard... say, for the squidsex!shippers among us:

Dusky tentacles
exploring the rippling depth
of Harry's laughter.

or...

Dunkle Tentakel,
lachende Wogen im See
liebkosen Harrys Schilf.

*snort* and because Lucius is love...

Schlange windet sich:
Goldschuppen schwarz von Blut, küßt
sie des Meisters Hand.

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[identity profile] liriaen.livejournal.com 2006-04-16 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww shit, the middle one is one syllable too long. Man oh man, this is hard!
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[personal profile] fourth_rose 2006-04-13 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, perfect! :-)))

Happy egg (and chocolate bunny) hunting to you, too!

[identity profile] sor-bet.livejournal.com 2006-04-14 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
That is the cutest. icon. ever.

Unless they're fighting.....rabbits don't fight, do they? But even so, bunnies!!!
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[personal profile] fourth_rose 2006-04-14 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! No, I don't think rabbits do any serious fighting ;-)
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[identity profile] kennahijja.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :). And that icon is Teh Cute indeed!!!

[identity profile] ariadneelda.livejournal.com 2006-04-14 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this was just brilliant! So brilliant that I didn't even get sad over Snape's death. :D
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[identity profile] kennahijja.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 01:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :)
(and I adore this icon of yours!)

[identity profile] sor-bet.livejournal.com 2006-04-14 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice. Even if you had to kill Snape. Oh, but hey, here's a fic in which you DIDN'T kill Harry! So I see now, it was a trade-off. ;-)

And I've been wanting to write a Casablanca HP for years, only I can't decide who should play Sam. Present-day Draco? MWPP-era Snape? So many possibilities.
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[identity profile] kennahijja.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 01:35 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin*
Depending entirely on who plays the others :).
Glad you liked the weird ficlet :).
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[personal profile] chthonya 2006-04-14 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
*g* Nice one. :) Particularly all the grace of a mangy owl with two broken legs. I wish I had your talent for similes - where do you get them from?
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[identity profile] kennahijja.livejournal.com 2006-04-15 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks - I *had* planned on 'all the grace of a mildewed trout with a pair of tattered fins', but people keep warning me off the fish imagery :(.

How's the head?
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[personal profile] chthonya 2006-04-15 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, owl works better when it's something that's flying, imo. I wasn't aware you had a penchant for fish imagery. Does this go with your shift into NC-17 stuff? ;)

Head is okay, I think. Twinged a little when I ran the comb over it but otherwise I'm not noticing anything untoward.